I came from R4R thread and here's my review
what I liked:I liked how this song various and the rhythm of the music.
what I not liked:At some moments the song was sounding very dirty, for example, at 0:22. Also, I heard dissonance in the melody here, like at 1:53, sounds preety inharmonious.
Overall:this song is very good and creative, and I liked it, but there's some flaws.
I don't really think I'm good at reviewing